Some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. Others believe that it is getting easier. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
The emergence of urban areas throughout the world is an subsequence of industrial revolutions. While some individuals argue that city life is getting easier by days, opponents hold a strong belief that it is not simple to settle down in a big city. From my own perspective, urban residents could get quite a lot of benefits but in return, they have to face many deteriorating social problems.
Firstly, it is undeniable that people are attracted to city lifestyle that is more advantageous in various aspects. Due to the growth of industrial zones as well as financial and business centers, young people are likely to have more opportunities for building up a successful career. Furthermore, education system and healthcare system which employ the most updated technologies, could be a great contributor ro people's choice to live in urban areas. A large range of means of transportation and transportation amenity development could satisfy citizen's demand for travelling. For example, almost all capital cities around the world have built their metro system that is isolated from other ways of mass transport and meet the requirement of fast and convenient commuting. Last but not least, city life seems more interesting to youngsters because of a chain of entertaining centers including shopping mall, theatre, restaurant and theme park.
However, a flock of employees to cities is a potential cause to urban issues. Populous areas are confronting considerably polluted land water resources which are direct consequences of overuse or lax regulations. In addition, more and more slums or inner cities are uncontrollably spreading beside magnificent cities, which consequently contribute to social problems such as drug, criminal and poverty. Lastly, it is a fact that many citizens are strictly maintaining their primary needs due to growing living cost and high inflation. All substantial commodities like foods, vehicles, household appliances as well as accommodation and other services are likely to be charged at higher price compared to rural living cost.
All things considered, it is still a controversy over two views about city life and whether its benefits overweigh its drawbacks or not but I am of the belief that each individual should raise awareness of city problems for a sustainable urban development.
- Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up.To what extent do you agree or 89
- Some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. Others believe that it is getting easier. Discuss both view and give your own opinion. 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 54, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... of urban areas throughout the world is an subsequence of industrial revolutions. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, so, still, well, while, for example, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1964.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38082191781 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08722997661 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621917808219 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1027712437 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.933333333 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172244511822 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506056244836 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383851868449 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936664135975 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237701632309 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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