It is obligatory for brood to attend institute among the age of 5 and 16 year.Few individuals reckon it is important that adolescent should utilize more time with family members. They trust juvenile would obtain more from living longer in academy . On the other hand there are numerous benefits and pitfalls to study in school or to stay home . Henceforth this essay will express its I partiall agreement with this statement
Firstly children are the future of every country. Study plays an essential role in 21 century . People believe it is irrefutable that children who begin to study at a early age have more chances to proceed in the future . In early age children’s memory capacity is too wide to acquire new knowledge and techniques . Furthermore they gain more knowledge and experience which are priceless and valuable
Secondly families are the first step where a child learn manners and etiquettes . Parents give proper attention on their kids. Even than children stay far from heavy studies burden and pressure of the stiff and hard competition
In conclusion looking into my crystal ball generally speaking children can show their ability in school rather than staying home they can fly as ‘like a bird’
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, look, second, secondly, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 201.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10945273632 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6820688713 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.701492537313 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.0412749726 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.7 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246492466787 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770171112162 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568511525634 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118929157529 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063438699186 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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