"Regulators and policymakers should respond to potential environmental threats even before the information is fully known or concrete."
How would you rate the accuracy of the above statement? Support your position with reasons and examples.
The earth's ecosystem must be monitored in order to ensure that the world we know today continues to exists for our future generation. The responsibility to monitor and govern our environment falls on our government. It is their duty to respond and assess all potential threats.
The importance of the environmental agencies can not be overlooked. It is their job to police and enforce laws that protect our ecosystem. Most environmental damages are not known until after its detrimental affects have already manifested. For example, the pollution of our rivers from the industrial revolution was n...
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Sentence: The earth's ecosystem must be monitored in order to ensure that the world we know today continues to exists for our future generation.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to to and exists
Sentence: In order to to this, the regulators must respond to all potential threats before the information is fully known.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a preposition
Suggestion: Refer to to and to
Sentence: Because of the complexity and the delicate balance of our environment, it it almost impossible to fully understand a threat without a full research study which should be undertaken by the environmental agencies.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a pronoun, personal, accusative
Suggestion: Refer to it and it
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 6
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 382 350
No. of Characters: 1875 1500
No. of Different Words: 193 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.421 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.908 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.85 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 131 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 98 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 64 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 49 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.19 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.062 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.238 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.287 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.502 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.081 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5