Although some people do not accept that we change as we grow, it is natural to have some changes in our social manners. I think there are some differences between young children`s and elderly people`s social manner.
Firstly, young children are more open-minded. They express their thoughts and feelings more clearly than adults. When we get older, we are able to retain our feelings. Some people say that this manner is good, because when people are open-minded, there manners are more honest. Other people believe that this change in manner is good, because it is selfish to express feelings and thoughts openly. I concur with changes in social manner, as sometimes it is wrong to express our feelings openly.
Secondly, young children are in a hurry in every case. They can take wrong steps while they are in a hurry. By contrast, adults think about something thousand times, and then move.
Finally, in my opinion there are some changes in relationships with people. Young children become more respectful and courteous when they get older. As they become adult, they enter to some organizations like universities, they communicate with some important people who can change their behavior. For instance, they get to socialize with professors. Professors are able to teach young children which manners are useful. Thus, when children become older, their social manner changes for the better.
Consequently, I think it is inevitable that everyone`s social manner changes from their childhood into adulthood. Moreover, this changes dependent on social conditions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, for instance, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75136329844 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0597817288 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.2631578947 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1578947368 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84210526316 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334642189345 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111700413343 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770406795462 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193524013645 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897562353036 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.8 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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