The chart below give information about the amount and type of water in the world summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main figures and make comparison where relevant.
The given pie charts and bar chart depict the quantity and different forms, in which fresh water available around the world.
In an overall, the amount of salt water is large when compared to fresh water,in which quantity of drinking water is very little. The bar chart shows the distribution of renewable fresh water in different regions.
According to the pie chart, among the percentage of total water available in the world, the salt water contributes a major sure of 97.5%. Whereas, fresh water availability is mere 2.5%. And the total fresh water shares is in three forms , such as frozen water contributing 69.8%, fresh underground water at 29.9% and other water accounts to 0.30%.
In case of bar graph, it shows that, the proportion of renewable fresh water in million tones, in different regions. Both South American and Asian regions have highest proportion of fresh water availability at 1600 million tones. Whereas other countries like Africa,North America,Easter and Western Europe distribute fresh water around 600 to 400 million tones. While Oceania and Caribbean contributes 200million tones of renewable fresh water. And Middle East got the least contribution of 100 million tones.
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- The charts below give information about the amount and types of water in the world.summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main figures and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The chart below give information about the amount and type of water in the world summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main figures and make comparison where relevant. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 78, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
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Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ater contributes a major sure of 97.5%. Whereas, fresh water availability is mere 2.5%....
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Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tal fresh water shares is in three forms , such as frozen water contributing 69.8%...
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Line 4, column 81, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
... proportion of renewable fresh water in million tones, in different regions. Both South...
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Line 4, column 155, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the highest'.
Suggestion: have the highest
.... Both South American and Asian regions have highest proportion of fresh water availability ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , North
...nes. Whereas other countries like Africa,North America,Easter and Western Europe distr...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Easter
...ther countries like Africa,North America,Easter and Western Europe distribute fresh wat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, whereas, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26041666667 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67508091107 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9098442907 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8181818182 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126797670212 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633946884007 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403842795618 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103083426193 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350282750446 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.