Since my childhood, I have always been taught not to lie and always be truthful to everyone. Because being truthful helps to keep your relationships strong and it also makes a person appear trustworthy. However, if a person has the habit of lying, then he is not accepted in the society as well as he faces difficulty in keeping up with that lie and further lies to support his previous lies.
For example, when I was in grade 9, my best friend was having a birthday and she decided to celebrate it on a farmhouse. My mother was always protective of me and i assumed that she will not let me go to the party as soon as she comes to know that it is at the farmhouse. So, I decided to lie to her that we are going to study at her place on her birthday. Unfortunately, my mother works with her mother and she came to know about the party at the farmhouse. When i came back home after school, she was extremely disappointed in me for not telling her the truth and became even more protective and took my phone. Because of the lie, me and my mother had trusting issues whenever I wanted to go out with friends or even to study. She doubted me every time. After a while things were back to normal but i learnt an important lesson that i should have told her the truth as she was only protecting me from the ill gathering and I was only able to understand this when I passed the teenage life.
Also, being truthful not only helps building strong family relationships but also, it helps in building strong work relationships between colleagues and managers. If you are truthful to your managers and colleagues then they will trust you and you get higher chances for being promoted. Also, truthful nature helps to build good reputation among the co-workers. For example, when I was working at the call center, we employees had to volunteer one of our off days for the availability to work. This was the practice to cover up for any other employee who could not show up for any reason. So, some of my co-workers used to lie as they did not wanted to work extra. However, I never lied about my availability and because of this they promoted me to be an Assistant Manager.
In some situations lying is better in order to avoid hurting someone. For example, my best friend was wearing a green dress and she wanted my opinion that how was she looking, I did not like it however, i kept that opinion to myself because i did not wanted to hurt her or make her feel uncomfortable in that dress.
I would like to conclude by saying that it is not easy to be truthful all the time however, if you try then it would not be so difficult in keeping up with it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 163, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... mother was always protective of me and i assumed that she will not let me go to ...
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Line 2, column 464, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... about the party at the farmhouse. When i came back home after school, she was ex...
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Line 2, column 801, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... a while things were back to normal but i learnt an important lesson that i shoul...
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Line 2, column 835, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...l but i learnt an important lesson that i should have told her the truth as she w...
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Line 4, column 37, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to build' or 'build'.
Suggestion: to build; build
... Also, being truthful not only helps building strong family relationships but also, i...
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Line 4, column 644, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
... co-workers used to lie as they did not wanted to work extra. However, I never lied ab...
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Line 6, column 204, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...she looking, I did not like it however, i kept that opinion to myself because i d...
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Line 6, column 242, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
..., i kept that opinion to myself because i did not wanted to hurt her or make her ...
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Line 6, column 252, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
...hat opinion to myself because i did not wanted to hurt her or make her feel uncomforta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, then, well, while, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 86.0 43.0788530466 200% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2153.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 496.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34072580645 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50506040266 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.45564516129 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 675.0 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3628540162 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.523809524 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.619047619 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61904761905 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.095745912605 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332336494554 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344765980011 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0587698819323 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379178905636 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.19 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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