The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree?
Nowadays almost everyone follows the latest fashion trends. Everyone wants different functional clothes with suitable venue. For example, we like to wear who is already wearing our friends. This is the new mentality.
In addition, there are plenty of fashion bloggers on social media which are attracted to humans about new trends. The most famous thing which numbers of people follow and it is celebrity clothes which everyone wants.
In my opinion we can the fashion is a kind of process which modifies the clothes. But as a human nature our choice of clothing is influenced by what other people wear. This is a clear sign that humans like to imitate others.
Humans tendency is following others because they endorse that product or clothes. There are also several consumers goods in market but people mostly prefer their products which known by celebrity because they follow them blindly. Sometimes Quality of products is also important this is one of the reason. We only copy because not they are good or bad cloths or products but we are influenced by their people. A number of people using the Brand's stuff but somehow they don't know about their advantage or drawbacks.
To the Conclusion, humans are social animals and they crave for Acceptance and appreciation so they allowing the tendency of popularity of fashion and lifestyle.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...using the Brands stuff but somehow they dont know about their advantage or drawbacks...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, in addition, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02242152466 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45767731069 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57399103139 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9371968986 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6666666667 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8666666667 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15791139002 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525719367712 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399772790465 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913632352881 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334122525751 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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