Many people discuss the issues faced in their work. Some of them claim that having the same tasks provides the development of the individual doing his job, in the other hand, other people run away from the routinely tasks during their work. In my opinion, I think it is more advantageous to have multi-tasks during the work day. I think this way for the reasons that I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, the daily routine is known as the most significant problem in the workers life. There is a major factor for this issue which is the daily activities. Most of the people complaining about their work because in a way it is very boring that they have to do every day the same activities, which make them feel like robots. For example, with the development of technologies, the number of the workers that they do repetitive tasks decreased because it was replaced with robots. This replacement at the first time is presented as a solution for the humans to get rid from the suffering of doing the same tasks during the work hours. For instance, when I was doing my final project in an electronic company, I saw many people working on repetitive tasks and at the time of the lunch, they complain about their works a lot and they want to have a different tasks during the day.
Second, many people are suffering from the daily routine of their work and doing the same task the whole day make the situation even worse. For instance many studies that having at work the same activity make people more stressful and dislike their work. For instance, many doctors in TV programs are talking about the routinely activities that we do during the work and their bad influences on the moral of the person and as a result his health. Furthermore, some researchers have proved that people who have a varied work tasks, are less stressful then the ones who have repetitive activities. My life is a compelling example. As I was at university, I had a side job during the summer break, it was a packing the food in a food centre, during the work I get really bored and stressed because I practically doing the same thing all the day. However, the next summer I worked as a waiter in a restaurant and I had not the same problem from the last year because every day I see different things.
To assume, based on the above discussion I strongly believe that having many tasks during the work make us more comfortable and happy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'workers'' or 'worker's'?
Suggestion: workers'; worker's
... as the most significant problem in the workers life. There is a major factor for this ...
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Line 3, column 864, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'task'?
Suggestion: task
...a lot and they want to have a different tasks during the day. Second, many people...
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Line 5, column 525, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'task'?
Suggestion: task
...oved that people who have a varied work tasks, are less stressful then the ones who h...
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Line 5, column 551, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...a varied work tasks, are less stressful then the ones who have repetitive activities...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, really, second, so, then, for example, for instance, i think, talking about, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1999.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 438.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56392694064 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47132066417 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.429223744292 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 630.0 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7356248421 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.055555556 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.45110844103 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317891524162 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112002867449 0.076458572812 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667345017533 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210631111503 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572236493118 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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