More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering,computing and medicine.some people belive that why encouraging the movement of such people rich countries are stealing from poor.other feel that this is only part of natural movement of workers. do you agree or disagree?
Globalization has shrunk the world into small global village. Nowadays advance masses of various skilled departments such as computing,engineering and medicine are migrating to developed countries in the hope of better future. This migration is reckoned by many people and they blame rich countries for promoting such steps. According to me, it is just a traditional part of natural movement of the workers.
Recently there is enormous growth in the movement of skilled workers in developed countries. It is because of these countries provide modern lifestyle, effluent pay-scale,world-class facilities and much more,which is the major reason of attraction of the workers. The perfection of these candidates enhance the much more advancement in the field of research,engineering,medicine,computing and so on. Which in turn is effective for the entire world, it promotes the sense of secularism and humanity among the world.
The developed countries have the best equipment to utilize the precious talent of these workers which is not possible for the native countries of these zombies. Moreover like India, these undeveloped countries functions on the reservation system which is hazardous for many deserving candidates so they loose the sense of patriotism and migrate towards flexible countries. As it is well said by an author of develop nation "you keep reserve,we keep deserve".
Furthermore, the global migration of workers have also rose the head of native countries among the world. Some life examples are 30% of scientist in NASA are Indian, CEO of Google is Indian and many more. Only through the hard-work of these Indians, we feel proud in the front of world.Thus global workers also enhances the fame of their countries throughout the globe.
Overall, it is crystal clear that migrant officials contribute a lot in the fame and economy of their respective countries. Only with their countless efforts their nation get identified and remarked alongside the queue of developed nations.
- More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering,computing and medicine.some people belive that why encouraging the movement of such people rich countries are stealing from poor.o 67
- More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering,computing and medicine.some people belive that why encouraging the movement of such people rich countries are stealing from poor.o 67
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Don't always support one side
Don't always support one side. Discuss two sides, try this pattern in 4 paragraphs:
paragraph 1: introduction. Your ideas/opinions here.
paragraph 2: Admittedly, there are some advantages of side A. First, ... Second, ...
paragraph 3: However, still I support side B. first,... Second, ...
paragraph 4: conclusion.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , engineering
...us skilled departments such as computing,engineering and medicine are migrating to developed...
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Line 1, column 326, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...ich countries for promoting such steps. According to me, it is just a traditional part of natur...
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Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , world-class
...ide modern lifestyle, effluent pay-scale,world-class facilities and much more,which is the m...
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Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...ale,world-class facilities and much more,which is the major reason of attraction of th...
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Line 3, column 358, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , engineering
...ore advancement in the field of research,engineering,medicine,computing and so on. Which in ...
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Line 3, column 379, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , computing
...e field of research,engineering,medicine,computing and so on. Which in turn is effective f...
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Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... the native countries of these zombies. Moreover like India, these undeveloped countries...
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Line 5, column 446, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , we
...of develop nation 'you keep reserve,we keep deserve'. Furthermore, the...
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Line 7, column 56, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'risen'.
Suggestion: risen
...e global migration of workers have also rose the head of native countries among the ...
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Line 7, column 287, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...ns, we feel proud in the front of world.Thus global workers also enhances the fame o...
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Line 7, column 287, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ns, we feel proud in the front of world.Thus global workers also enhances the fame o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49196141479 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.59914670027 2.80592935109 128% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56270096463 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5927757974 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.75 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8125 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145966652743 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461285099141 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506771178055 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748973652119 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485557140489 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.