Nowadays most of the people are wanted to explore different cultures, traditions and habitats. There are plenty of sources to gain knowledge on cultures. In this context, I'm going to discuss about the possible ways to learn cultural diversity.
On one hand, we can explore more about cultural differences via books, films and internet, those are rich source of information. There are several advantages, firstly we can gain lot information with in short span of time by avoiding travelling and with less expenses. Secondly, the amount of information with these sources is limitless. Most of the people nowadays are able to find different cultures and their living standards through books. Books are providing way more information about various cultures.
on the other hand, travelling to different places has more benefits. we can gain more insights from what we experience and we can interact directly with people. For example, many of the tourists wanted to relish the traditional dishes and wanted to put on their traditional garments. Another reason is that we can make countless friends by travelling and we can share our impressions about what they have seen and done during the trip.
In conclusion, I believe that we can use travel guidebooks, films or the internet to „do our homework‟ in order to decide some of the things and places that we want to experience for ourselves, but we can learn more by experiencing new cultures through travelling.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, in short, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15062761506 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78338612461 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556485355649 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6137843266 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6923076923 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3846153846 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287769422702 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904515843876 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890420516543 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171725395276 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811255690586 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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