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saaaaaahhhaaarrrr.What are the qualities of a good son or daughter? Have these qualities changed or remained the same over time in your culture?
As a good daughter or son, there are lots of positive qualities. But, from my view point, the most important ones which parents expect their children to have are being obedient, respectful, and honest. These virtues are valuable today, although today's children are neglectful about and irresponsible for. Today's children aged 18 and more have become independent of their parents and sometimes lose the qualities that they should have as good children.
The first quality that a good son or daughter should have is being obedient. Children should obey their parents. Parents care for th...
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Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace ask with verb, past tense
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No. of Different Words: 209 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.596 4.7
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No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
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Sentence Length SD: 7.524 7.5
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