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saaaaaahhhaaarrrr.What are the qualities of a good son or daughter? Have these qualities changed or remained the same over time in your culture?
As a good daughter or son, there are lots of positive qualities. But, from my view point, the most important ones which parents expect their children to have are being obedient, respectful, and honest. These virtues are valuable today, although today's children are neglectful about and irresponsible for. Today's children aged 18 and more have become independent of their parents and sometimes lose the qualities that they should have as good children.
The first quality that a good son or daughter should have is being obedient. Children should obey their parents. Parents care for th...
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Sentence: For example, it is too vital that son ask his parents for the girl who is supposed to be his wife soon.
Description: The fragment son ask his is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace ask with verb, past tense
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Score: 25 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 25 15
No. of Words: 446 350
No. of Characters: 2161 1500
No. of Different Words: 209 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.596 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.845 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.41 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 152 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 118 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 74 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.84 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.524 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.52 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.323 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.492 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.117 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5