Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time.
Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter
1. Explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital
2. Say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do
3. Give details of when you would be available for this work
Write not less than 150 words
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to let you know that I am interested in doing volunteer work at your establishment in my spare time.
Recently, I learnt through a radio advertisement that Saint John Health Centre, is understaffed and have requested from authorities additional work force to cater for the shortfall. In addition, I have great passion for helping people who need assistance most especially those who are ill.
let me explain in details my skills and capabilities. I am a hygiene and sanitation officer by profession so working in the sanitary department would not be new for me. I can work effectively unsupervised in cleaning the both the private and public wards, the theatre and the laboratory.
Based on my normal work schedule, it seems I would have plenty of free time from 15th March, which is next month, and would like to put in ten hours weekly. Working twice a week on Monday's and Friday's in the late afternoons would be fine for me.
I look forward in hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Martin Oben.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Let
...e most especially those who are ill. let me explain in details my skills and cap...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90710382514 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87625897949 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677595628415 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0328286623 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332109289699 0.216113520407 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110151340966 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651859274065 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16644425606 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660846922841 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.