You eat at your college canteen every time. You think it needs some improvements. write a letter to the principal.
In your letter:
. discuss what you like about the canteen
. what you do not like about it.
. suggest improvements
Dear Sir
I am one of the third year students of your college and writing this letter to draw your attention towards several issues of the cafeteria which need to be improved.
I always have my two times meal at college canteen. The quality of the food provided is very good. Besides that, all the eatables are available at reasonable prices which can be easily affordable by all the learners. Moreover, cafeteria is quite large and has proper ventilation which is a good thing as students do not feel difficulties while sitting in canteen during summer days.
On other hand there are some problems which need to look upon. There is no proper place to dump the wasted food and to place the used plates. So, students leave their plates on the table which make the environment unhygienic as the flies keep on roaming on the food left on tables.
It is necessary to take action to resolve these issues otherwise there might be chances of diseases to spread. To throw the left over eatables, dustbins must be placed in one corner and trolleys or racks should be provided to place the used plates. I hope that you will think about the outcomes of the issues and try to resolve them.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
John Smith
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| 2018-08-10 | sai.varadula | 78 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, moreover, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69369369369 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33673966118 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635135135135 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0025886876 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1538461538 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0769230769 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175512542889 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593655593575 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062655264635 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925466368751 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449349490498 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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