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The graph shows the entry of immigrants into UK from West Indies,India and Pakistan between 1940to1970.
The rendered line graph demonstrates the entry of immigrants into UK from three countries between the year 1940,1950,1960 and 1970.the vertical axis shows the number of immigrants in thousands and horizontal axis depicted the time period in years.
It can be clearly seen from the line graph that the number of immigrants in given countries,West Indies,India and Pakistan were almost equally same from 140 to 1950. In the year 1960,38,000 people entered into UK from West Indies was much more higher than India and Pakistan.In the year from 1960 to 1970 the figure of immigrants from bo...
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Sentence: While the immigrants of Indian and Pakistan increased slowly till 1960,Whereas both countries immigrants made a significant improvement, growing from 10,000 to 30,000 respectively. there were a gigantic difference between the migareters during the time period both middle and ending.
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Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 8 10
No. of Words: 231 200
No. of Characters: 1170 1000
No. of Different Words: 115 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.899 4.0
Average Word Length: 5.065 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.615 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 82 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 53 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 41 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 28.875 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.639 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.25 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.561 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.764 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.206 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4