You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town.
Write a letter to the shop.
-Ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them.
-Ask but the prices are and
- How long they will be able to hold the good for you
Dear Ram,
I am in need of electrical items which I have not been able to prosure in my town. I understand you are a reputed firm dealing in all sports of electrical and electronic goods and that you would most probably be able to supply them. I am enclosing a list of the items that I require. Please go through the same and let me know if you can supply all of them. The only item that I think you may not have is the PS2 cable for computer networking. Let me know per return of post what all items you can supply and their prices. Since my requirement please substantial, I am sure, you would charge me only at wholesale rates. If there are any items that you do not have stock of, could you please prosure them from your suppliers?
Lastly, how long would you be able to reserve the goods for me since I would be able to visit your town only after a week or 10 days?
Yours faithfully,
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ram, I am in need of electrical items which I...
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Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...firm dealing in all sports of electrical and electronic goods and that you would ...
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Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d most probably be able to supply them. I am enclosing a list of the items that I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, may, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 731.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.17714285714 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25686074186 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9994285668 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.1 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259327551339 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101103670428 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920129195294 0.0603063233224 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247187478368 0.12726935374 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472242450501 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.67 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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