Personal
Development is the base for professional
development and advancing in one's career. To what
extent do you agree or disagree?
The role of personal development in the professional growth and advancing in one's career has always been a debatable topic. Even though, many people claim that personal growth plays a major role in the career. Others reject this notion and argue that personal development has no significant impact on professional development. In my opinion, I completely agree with the statement that personal development has a significant role in one's career. This essay would further elaborate both sides with justifying reasons and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
To begin with, in fast running competition world, organizations are looking for candidates with good personal skills. Personal development helps to improve talents and potential ability which is required to achieve success. Secondly, it helps to improve awareness and identity which in turn creates your own name in the office and build trust. For example, interpersonal skills are required to interact with clients, the onshore team on daily calls, to communicate and share our project status to them clearly. Finally, personal growth stands an employ in a good stand as far as professional career is concerned.
On the other hand, critics may point out that personal skills have nothing to do with the professional growth. They believe that it entirely depends on the performance and how efficient they perform their job. For example, performance ratings are totally dependent on how well employee performed the job and delivered the product within the deadline.
According to the arguments aforementioned, one can reach out to the conclusion that professional growth is highly dependent on your personal development skills. In a nutshell, it can be concluded that to achieve success in one's life interpersonal skills play a vital role.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 282.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40780141844 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95523711181 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578014184397 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.140377375 50.4703680194 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.666666667 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105658337145 0.242375264174 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386475533026 0.0925447433944 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042649448205 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0609739120098 0.151781067708 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028218923249 0.0609392437508 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.