some people think, in a city, the best way to travel is by car and other thinks bicycle is best.
Discuss both view and give your opinion
In this rapidly changing world, advancements in vehicles have been changing the transport system. traveling in cities have become more convenient and easier than old-era. People have been commuting in various vehicles such as local trains, bikes, cars etc. As a result, it has made the life flexible at the cost of the environment. due to the inimical situation in the environment has given the space to a debate of traveling by car or bicycle as a medium of transport in cities.
There are innumerable advantage succor by riding a bicycle. Firstly, pollution level in cities has been increasing dramatically due to the use of petrol-vehicles. Hence, embrace to ride a bicycle as mode of commute by citizens can significantly reduce the pollution. As a consequence, it is indirectly helping to curb out the impacts of globalization and climate change. Secondly, cycle requires minimal maintenance because of a simple mechanic structure is used to manufacture. Moreover, assembling a cycle is easy. Therefore, it is cheaper than car. It also helps to save more money compared to paying the heft of an amount to fill the petrol or diesel. However, commuting long distance can make people tired-some and decrease the work efficiency, if people have to work just after cycling. On the contrary, it has a massive advantage in person's healthy life. Cycling is passive exercise while commuting.
On the other hand, driving or hiring a car also has vital benefits. For example, hiring a car in cities make the person multitasking. Hence, it saves the time for chore tasks. As a result, people increase work efficiency and time utilization in working-hour. Use of car makes people more social due to less journey time whereas cycling takes so much time to reach destination. However, increasing traffic in peak hours have changed the schedule of people. Moreover, desperation due to driving slow in traffic leads the driver to drive fast in empty-road which eventually increase the road-rage.
In conclusion, wherever the traffic and pollution are deteriorating the condition of cities, bicycles are the best alternative to applicate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Traveling
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Due
...lexible at the cost of the environment. due to the inimical situation in the enviro...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'succors'?
Suggestion: succors
...ies. There are innumerable advantage succor by riding a bicycle. Firstly, pollution...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1884057971 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00282860419 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.663663765 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5833333333 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.375 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70833333333 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117661408607 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0284954313431 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354424254772 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766311824834 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216507768603 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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