Some people believe that travelling alone really benefits in learning a country's culture and experience, while others believe it is better to travel with someone you know. Discuss both these views and share your opinion.
Due to the advancement of technology, travelling has become very convenient and cheap. It promotes national and international travel. Some people opine that visiting to new countries to get exposure of tradition and culture is beneficial when travelled alone while others believe that travelling in a group is beneficial. Both the trends have their own significance. But, in my opinion, I think that visiting in a group is much better. This essay shall discuss both the views.
When individuals visit alone to various places then they can roam around the city freely without any interference. In this way, they can learn a lot about the customs and languages spoken by the individuals of the visited location. Besides that, they can stay at any location according to their budget and comfort. Moreover, when people travel alone then they get more chances to interact with the local people and can understand lifestyle, choices, language spoken by the natives in a better way.
On the other hand, group travel is a boon for the travellers. Firstly, whole trip budget get divided among all and they do not have to spend much. However, when individuals travel alone, they have to manage whole budget of the trip themselves. Secondly, visitors do not feel alone when visiting with their friends or family members and can explore the new locations while spending quality them with their loved ones. Last but not the least, travellers in a group have support of each other and they do not become victim of theft, snatching and other crimes but, this may happen when travelling alone in a new country.
In conclusion, I would like to say that both travelling alone and in a group have importance in their own way. Although, visiting with friends or family is safer, affordable and safer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Suggestion:
... the customs and languages spoken by the individuals of the visited location. Bes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96666666667 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60152946467 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.6161345777 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6470588235 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6470588235 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76470588235 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245222258043 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820027249255 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754617837287 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160777249349 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918661816245 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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