57) Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
After a busy day at work or school most of the people like to watch movies. Movies are of different kinds, movies can entertain us and also teach us knowledgeable thoughts. In my view i like to designed to amuse and entertain few hours.
First of all, people have become too much money minded, they don't want to waste a single minute of their life and also they run behind achieving their goals. By doing all these people have forgotten to smile, laugh or enjoy a bit of moment in their life. Life has become mentally and physically very stressful. Taking some time-off and watching entertaining ...
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