Write a letter to complain about a dangerous situation when some adolescents let their dogs run wild in public.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to the property management in regards to a hazardous incident that happened in our community last evening.
As you know, it is a regular practice for residents to bring their pets to the common play area every evening. It has been very fortunate that all tenants to date have been following the rules of the play area, also ensuring their pets are leashed at all times in the public areas. However, there was a scary incident that took place last evening when few youngsters brought their dogs into the play area and left then unleashed. It was very dangerous as there were toddlers, young children and elderly people at the park during this time. Despite speaking to the youngsters, they did nothing to rectify their action nor leave the park. Fortunately, there were no mishaps due to this incident.
Please appoint a security around the play area, so just in case of any such situation the tenants to approach the security for help. Hope you could look into the matter immediately and take necessary measures to avoid such situation in the future.
Yours faithfully,
Sandra Brown
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...I am writing to the property management in regards to a hazardous incident that happened in o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, then, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9109947644 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43859935416 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659685863874 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5045566992 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115133059759 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036355015156 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0255997815791 0.0603063233224 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0624026858163 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288760043124 0.0580467560999 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.