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writing task 1 from test 4, cambridge 7
These four pie charts compares electricity production in two countries, Australia and france in1980 and in 2000. There are 5 different sources compared between these countries.
As it is clearly obvious from charts that energy production is drastically increased in both countries in these 20 years period. Coal is the major source for electricity production in Australia in both eras. In 1980 50 units of electricity source is from coal which increased to 130 units in 20 years. Natural gas and hydropower are equally contributing their part for electricity production in 1980 which is 20 uni...
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Sentence: These four pie charts compares electricity production in two countries, Australia and france in1980 and in 2000.
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