Childcare training courses should be mandatory for all parents. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion and include relevant examples.
These days concept of attending parenting training courses has evolved. it has become trend and some people feel it is advisable for several reasons. However, other feels parents will be better prepared for their parenting task. i disagree this concept.i feel people should not have to take parenting training because nobody should to tell you how to raise child.
To begin with,there are several reasons to endorse my notion.Parents are always able to take care of their children.Each child has unique characteristics and requirements so it is a waste of money to attend parenting courses as it might not work well for your child.To take care of child is most essential duty of every parent which make them mature as well as responsible person in the society .Moreover, social and economic condition of every family is different and parents should raise their child according to their financial status,caliber , capacity , and these profound information are not taught in parenting course. There is no right or wrong to raise a child. Families are different and their culture, tradition,values are differ ,and therefore it is necessary to raise child self.
Paradoxically,other pool of thoughts says that it is better option as the parents learn how to cope up with the stress. In contemporary world,people lives in nuclear families .Consequently, there are no elders to guide the mother and father about parenting and how to nurture the child.Hence,it turn out be advantageous in such circumstances.At the parenting sessions the parents are taught about recognizing and preventing child abuse. in addition to this, it also proffer knowledge about how to make childproof home with equipped facilities as well as also taught use of first aid techniques in some unexpected situations.
To conclude,parenting is long-term job.i feel parents get more stress by attending parenting classes and it force to look for perfection rather than enjoying parenthood.it is advisable to take suggestions and guidance from a seniors in family to raise a child. Finally, New parents should observe and discuss to their parents for upbringing their child instead of attending any classes.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31594202899 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14179197746 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550724637681 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 155.542665637 49.4020404114 315% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 152.833333333 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.75 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5833333333 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 37.0 5.01903807615 737% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0969270294255 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046344477313 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432982742636 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0709018103144 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493405082996 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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