On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
● describe the item you lost
●explain how you lost it.
●tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear Sir,
Hope this letter finds you in good health. I am writing this letter in regards to my camera, which I recently lost whilst on a holiday in Mexico.
Last week I was with my family in Mexico for a duration of 7 days. I was carrying a Canon 360 D camera with myself. It was black in color and the cover of the camera was brown with the initials of my name in gold (J.D) on the cover.
However, on the third day of our tour, I suddenly realized that my camera was missing. We went for a safari tour on the previous day. In order to reach the place, we first had to commute by a train and then by a jeep. I am not sure where did I leave my camera, as we were excited and busy in enjoying the mesmerizing views.
I would hence like a compensation for my camera. The camera costed 550$ and I have the original bill for the same. Could you please guide me, what is the procedure to make a claim for the camera?
Your prompt reply is awaited.
Yours Sincerely
Janet Dsouza.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 69, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...n good health. I am writing this letter in regards to my camera, which I recently lost whilst...
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Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: black
... Canon 360 D camera with myself. It was black in color and the cover of the camera was brown w...
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Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: D
... with the initials of my name in gold J.D on the cover. However, on the third ...
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Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ls of my name in gold J.D on the cover. However, on the third day of our tour, I...
^^^
Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$550'.
Suggestion: $550
...sation for my camera. The camera costed 550$ and I have the original bill for the sa...
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Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rompt reply is awaited. Yours Sincerely Janet Dsouza.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, so, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.0829015544 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18091019955 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621761658031 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3829722452 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.2857142857 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7857142857 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127182830715 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453876781465 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587053611286 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081315454413 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0903831898054 0.0580467560999 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.7 8.37731958763 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.79 8.71597938144 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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