You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to
1- Explain the reason why you decline the offer
2- Express you gratitude
3- Explain you like your current job very much
Dear Sir or Madam,
Reference is made to the offer which is received from your reputable company. I am writing to inform you that I will be unable to join.
The offer is signed off, but I made a second thought to stay in my current position at Morley Parsons. Although your company fits my skills and qualification, its location is very far from my home. I won’t be an added value to your team after getting drained from the travel back and forth from your company.
Once I got your valuable offer, it was a push forward step in my career. Therefore, I am very thankful for your consideration of my Resume to join your prestigious team. Please send my very best regards to all managers and directors, especially Mr. Hemedia, who interviewed and accepted me.
Currently, I am handling the projects department at my company, and I am fascinated with the daily activities either with colleagues or clients. This position helps to me to improve my skills, not only it allows me to deal with different clients locally, but also from all over the world. These are few of many reasons to like my position.
I look forward to receiving your acknowledgement.
Yours faithfully,
Ayoub
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 30, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'projects'' or 'project's'?
Suggestion: projects'; project's
...ted me. Currently, I am handling the projects department at my company, and I am fasc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, second, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82608695652 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79376621092 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4273988844 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8461538462 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126249189878 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497765557204 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431449869197 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0734490533662 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518383652311 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.