You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to
1- Explain the reason why you decline the offer
2- Express you gratitude
3- Explain you like your current job very much
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I will be unable to join your company from next month in Bangalore.
I understand that the offer is already signed off but due to recent turn of events, I would not be able to honor my part of the deal. Moving to Bangalore was a great opportunity for me to reunite with my family as my wife is working in Bangalore. However, she is getting transferred to Pune and I do not want to jeopardize this chance again.
It was one of the happiest days when I was informed about my selection for your company as I have heard so many good things about the organization. Unfortunately, it is not possible for me to join this time. I want to thank entire recruitment team and express my deepest apology to everyone, especially Mr. Mohan who took my interview.
Besides, my current company has offered a promotion and this new position has the same exposure as I was supposed to get in your team. So, I am really excited about my new work here. I am extremely sorry that I could not join your firm.
I look forward to receiving your acknowledgement soon.
Yours faithfully,
Sandip Ramani
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52857142857 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70466549124 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62380952381 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.230844303 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.25 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0986206217351 0.216113520407 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0344149935926 0.0766984524023 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486563678693 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0652154236808 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687429235171 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.