Popular events like the football world cup matches and other international sporting occasion are essential is easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent to do agree or disagree with this opinion?
Countries can maintain peace and harmony between them by hosting different sporting activities, such as the Football World Cup or other international sports such as the Olympics. This is a safe way and simple way to express love for the nation.
To begin with, it is a good idea to arrange different kind of sporting activities or held world cup matches. This kind of activities lets other countries people to visit sport hosting country. For example, easy availability of visitors VISA for attending and enjoying matches. Furthermore, during the matches people do come in contact with each other, become friends and share a common love for the game. This helps them to maintain, improve and develop love for people from other countries. For instance, cricket match between two rival countries, India and Pakistan. Attending matches will let people from the both the countries to know the same culture which they are shared for a long time.
On the other hand, it could be possible to rival countries can express their emotions or patriotism in aggression. For instance, popular cricketing event, ‘The Ashes’, which is played between Australia and England, is ‘Do or Die’ match. If one country lost the match, there are riots on the sporting field among the spectators which is a difficult task to manage. Due to this, even international sport personals are attacked or beaten to express anger.
In conclusion, I believe it is important to have football world cup matches or internal sports, such as Olympics to express feeling and love towards the country in a safe and simple way, but this could be the only fundamental way of achieving peace between any countries.
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Can you please give me little
Can you please give me little more details why I got 6.5?
So that I can precisely work on it, I mean over here, does my Task Achievement, Coherence & Cohesion, Lexical Resource and Grammatical Range and Accuracy are weak.
If yes, then please let me know which part is poor.
There are no big flaws found
There are no big flaws found in this essay.
Even though we can put No. of Different Words: 151 200 as the flaw, but comparing to the total words of the essay: No. of Words: 278, it is not a big issue. So we didn't put flaws on the top.
If there are no flaws on the top but the scores are not high, mostly means you will need to improve the language.
Also you will need to pay attention to grammar. You lost credits greatly with that grammatical error. Can you think about it why?
it could be possible to rival countries can express their emotions or patriotism in aggression.
Suggestion: it could be possible for rival countries to express their emotions or patriotism in aggression.
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Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 278 350
No. of Characters: 1351 1500
No. of Different Words: 151 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.083 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.86 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.53 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 95 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 79 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 47 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 29 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.857 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.879 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.714 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.345 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.538 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.075 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5