In this set of materials, the reading passage talks about that there are employee want work five days a week, but there are others want to work four days a week. The professor in the listening track agree with what was mentioned in the reading passage.
In the reading passage, it is mentioned In US there are employee prefer to work Five days a week and others want to work four days a week and they agree with that their salary will be decreased. However, they should follow the Law in the country. In addition, The passage mentioned that it will help the economy of many companies.
According to the listening track, the Professor said the same is what was mentioned in the reading.Moreover, he add some solutions to the companies which is employee can do what they are doing in all week, in four days a week in working by increase the number of hours in the day.Furthermore, the companies can offer many opportunities to the employee like who will work over time, will take a reward. In contrast, the people who wants to work four days a week ;their health will be affected.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
In this set of materials, the reading pa...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... was mentioned in the reading passage. In the reading passage, it is men...
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Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'employees'?
Suggestion: employees
...assage, it is mentioned In US there are employee prefer to work Five days a week and oth...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ll help the economy of many companies. According to the listening ...
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Line 6, column 113, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...me is what was mentioned in the reading.Moreover, he add some solutions to the companies...
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Line 6, column 126, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'adds'.
Suggestion: adds
...s mentioned in the reading.Moreover, he add some solutions to the companies which i...
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Line 6, column 294, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
...increase the number of hours in the day.Furthermore, the companies can offer many opportuni...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, moreover, so, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 22.412803532 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 1373.03311258 65% => OK
No of words: 195.0 270.72406181 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58461538462 5.08290768461 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 4.04702891845 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61812827431 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 145.348785872 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471794871795 0.540411800872 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 266.4 419.366225166 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.156811463 49.2860985944 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 127.714285714 110.228320801 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8571428571 21.698381199 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06452816374 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34128840482 0.272083759551 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159609166201 0.0996497079465 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125055544913 0.0662205650399 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257780443617 0.162205337803 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565391352977 0.0443174109184 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.3589403974 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 12.2367328918 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.42419426049 86% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 63.6247240618 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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