It is undoubtedly the case that decreasing birth rate and increase in the rate of senior citizen have any effect on developed countries or not ? In this essay, I will examine the possible effects for this trend and suggest some of the practical policies that authorities could implement to curb this problem
First step is to understand why is this happening? Broadly speaking, there are number of effects of this. The first and foremost the economy of the country will be effected .As it is obvious that if a country will have less number of young people than there will be less number of working people also . This will effect the productivity of that country .This problem could be curb by migrating youth from developing countries to developed ones. This will benifit the country as there economy will boost and this will also benifit individuals as they will get work to do.
Probing ahead, another effect of this will be seen in defence area of that developed countries. As military force demand young people rather than the aged one . So they will be endangered from being attacked by other countries. To overcome this problem developed countries should make best use of 'Technology' to produce best and advance weapons to strengthen their security.
In conclusion,there are variety of different factors that led to make this problem worse while, it may not be possible to find complete solution of this but this could be solved by government by making certain rules regarding family planning and migration from developing countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, regarding, so, then, while, broadly speaking, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01167315175 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61635728519 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533073929961 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.7268456362 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.090909091 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238708458421 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115410117745 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694288511822 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154387395713 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068517581456 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.