The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing?
Since its invention, Internet has changed our ways to access information. Some people argue that this can be better to our society, however, I strongly disagree with that.
The major advantage of Internet is to provide an easy way to look for information. If it was difficult to find information about a company in the past, it is now more convenient and much easier with a computer that has access to the Internet since many companies have opened their owned website and published their profiles to the Internet. Additionally, the Internet is considered as the biggest knowledge resource and students can search for any subject they need. For example, Google Patent provides a free access to all kinds of patents for researchers.
In contrast, people can make use of Internet for bad purposes. Since Internet is an open platform, it is therefore upon on its users. People can access adult websites, which provide violent or pornography contents, and distribute those contents on social networks without permission. Moreover, using wrong information to threaten the safety of a country is the most dangerous factor and causes attention from authorities globally. For example, the knowledge to make a bomb was easily found and shared among the terrorists in the September 11th attack to the US. As a consequence, governments should pay attention to new mechanisms to control the usage of information in the right way.
In summary, exploring information is never easier than before with the help of the Internet, yet it must be use with an appropriate purpose.
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- Reading books keeps a person’s mind active, whereas watching films and television is passive and does not require a person to use their imagination.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 78
- Reading books keeps a person’s mind active, whereas watching films and television is passive and does not require a person to use their imagination.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 61
- The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? 59
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 504, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'free access'.
Suggestion: free access
...ed. For example, Google Patent provides a free access to all kinds of patents for researchers...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in contrast, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86304409403 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609375 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4109682862 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.923076923 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138250119981 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537401202674 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559029146669 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943476351783 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647722820125 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.