buying things on the internet, such as books, air tickets, and groceries, is becoming more and more.
do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages.
It is irrefutably true that nowadays, for purchasing stuff like home essentials, study material, and ticketing is becoming increasingly common for people to go online rather than going to a shop or a travel agent. In my perspective, the merits outstrip the demerits.
On the bright side, at first, the e-shopping has a positive role to play in the world due to its convenience, cheapness and other multifarious benefits. One of the greatest merits of online shopping is that everything is very easily available over the internet. Many of the e-commerce organizations like Amazon, Flipkart and what not. These companies always provide the best quality products at the cheaper rate. Sometimes they give plenty of discount on some purchases to attract the vast majority of customers, this is a win-win situation for the company and as well as for buyers. Every single material is available and its just one clicks away. Therefore, no more hovering in shopping malls, shops and waiting to pay bills in the queue.
Secondly, apart from its convenience and price, it is absolutely to be pivotal that there are no limitations and conditions. No matter what weather and what time it is, everything is available round the clock. Furthermore, the e-ticketing is also in trend nowadays, the passenger does not need to wait in queues to book their tickets, they can easily book them on the websites online. For example, the airplane ticket can be booked before days of the flight and there is also discount that many companies give to the customers as well. Sometimes, books are not available in the libraries or bookstores then it is a good and very effective idea to dig into the internet and purchase the book that anyone is looking for.
On the other hand, there are some of the dominant disadvantages, for instance, fraud, online theft, and late shipping delivery. To expand it would be seen that sometimes, there may be a different product that a customer receives than the originally shown on that website that leads to deception and also adding into it product may be damaged or outdated because it is hard to examine unless u see that by own eyes. Otehr than that, your confidential detals like credit card number, online banking number is not sage unles and until thw website is not fully secure. many of the times due to some bad weather or any other reason the shipping might be late for days that u already paid for but if u buy it at the store then u can get it hand to hand.
Wrapping up, given the aforementioned statement, it is quite evident that buying things online has both pros and cons. But, from my point of view the merits outplays the demerits.
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- The given graph shows the units made and produced by a company from 2000 to 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 87
- Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? 73
- buying things on the internet, such as books, air tickets, and groceries, is becoming more and more.do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Line 7, column 566, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
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Line 7, column 735, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'hands'?
Suggestion: hands
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, apart from, as for, for example, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2210.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 461.0 315.596192385 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79392624729 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65609164328 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 176.041082164 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553145336226 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 704.7 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9550472349 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.05 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0861718949211 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0245108650511 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361797308318 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0465992723234 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286566649081 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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