some people believe international events cause problems for the host country that is not worth holding it?Agree or disagree?

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inconvenience owing to international events is,genera...
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...ssion among many people across the world ,and a segment of society advocates hosti...
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...advocates hosting them is not worthwhile .However,in my opinion, these events brin...
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...vocates hosting them is not worthwhile .However,in my opinion, these events bring lots ...
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... hosting them is not worthwhile .However,in my opinion, these events bring lots of ...
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...ion, these events bring lots of benefits ,like revenue generation ,highlight the i...
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... country worldwide due to smooth conduct,which will be discussed in the forthcoming pa...
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... discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs . From my observation,a lot of money c...
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...ming paragraphs . From my observation,a lot of money could be earned from visit...
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... of money could be earned from visitors.Many sports lovers apparently visit to watch...
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...ch their favourite teams or players play ,and they book hotels for accommodation a...
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...ation and spend money on other amenities .In India,for example ,Cricket World Cup ...
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...ion and spend money on other amenities .In India,for example ,Cricket World Cup wa...
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...on other amenities .In India,for example ,Cricket World Cup was played in 2011,and...
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...d which paved the way to rise in economy . International events,moreover,exhibi...
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...er,exhibit the actual image of a country .There are evidently certain guidelines t...
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...re evidently certain guidelines to make an big event successful without any disrup...
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... event successful without any disruption ,and if these are followed then it depict...
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...certainly lift their reputation globally .Olympic 2015 games were played in China ...
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...rtainly lift their reputation globally .Olympic 2015 games were played in China for the...
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... were played in China for the first time ,and went on really well due to good orga...
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... on really well due to good organisation .now they again get a chance to host 2019...
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...because of their past success in hosting . however,there are few issues which c...
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... could be mitigated by good organisation . To conclude,according to me ,it is i...
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...isation . To conclude,according to me ,it is indispensable for a country to hos...
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...al profit and raise its status worldwide .However,there could be some minor proble...
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...wever,there could be some minor problems ,namely congestions on the roads and othe...
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...by organising the event in the right way .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, however, if, moreover, really, so, then, well, while, for example, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39426523297 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24484201502 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655913978495 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 20.2975951904 271% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.422198801 49.4020404114 213% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 301.0 106.682146367 282% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.8 20.7667163134 269% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.6 7.06120827912 320% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 42.0 5.01903807615 837% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18426639929 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101464443365 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629389772671 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101464443365 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629389772671 0.056905535591 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.9 13.0946893788 244% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 7.19 50.2224549098 14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 11.3001002004 229% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.87 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.61 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.0 10.1190380762 237% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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