It is thought by some people that in order to live a full life having the internet connection is not mandatory. In my opinion, I think that it is totally possible to pass a whole life without getting the internet access.
One good reason to consider why the internet is not essential for our lives is that the internet is not one of the basic human needs such as food, clothes, and houses. It is merely a tool which is only necessary to accomplish some of our accessory tasks such as communication and entertainment. To illustrate, people only consider getting the internet connection when they have extra money in their hand after fulfilling all of their basic livelihood demands.
Another good reason to consider is that to what extent the internet helps us in our day-to-day living? In other words, there are a few aspects in which the internet has proven its efficacy. For example, it fastens the process of social and business communication as well as has enriched our information technology. But, are these really so crucial for human existence? It can be observed that without these advantages of Internet people lived their lives in the past and living at present somewhere in the world and hopefully would live in the future.
Finally, it is undeniable that yet, not only most of the part of the world is not covered by the Internet service but also there are some people who even do not hear about the term ‘internet’. For instance, there are thousands of people in my village who are enjoying their breaths without any internet connection since the dawn of the internet era.
In conclusion, I want to go with those people who think that living a whole life does not necessitate the internet access at all.
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- Nowadays families move to different countries for work Some people think it has a negative effect on children while others disagree Discuss both views and give your own opinion 69
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on since the dawn of the internet era. In conclusion, I want to go with those p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, really, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79666666667 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7599738324 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8122814152 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.692307692 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253822456526 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947517039047 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561125671799 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154394557487 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456758525704 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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