Some people assert that traveling by a personal four wheeler is the best while others say that cycle is the best. Both the opinion have their own importance. The essay will deal with the same.
On the one hand, it can be seen that the number of cars have grown in number drastically in both rural and urban area which shows that everyone prefers the benefits and comfort of having a car as it provides freedom, mobility and independence. There is no comparison to the benefits of a car. It provides a safe mode of transport in case of a bad and turbulent weather. For instance, during the rainy season there are many thunderstorms and for the said season it acts as a blanket of protection for the rider. Thus, the car has own reasons to be loved owing to the uses in precarious times.
On the other hand, there are others who believe that bicycle is the best. In the recent times, due to environmental issues many have been advocating for means of transportation which are clean and environment friendly. One such mode includes a cycle. The reason many choose it is because of the low cost of maintenance, no fuel costs, less pollution and further it keeps one active. For example, in many South Asian countries now are designated cycle lanes to encourage people to ride them and in addition many financial benefits are given to the ones who chose to ride it. Therefore, in places where people find it hard to maintain a other modes of transport in those places cycles are replacing other modes.
In conclusion, in my opinion, even though, the cycle is a clean and green form of transportation, but it will not be possible to out run car as a preferred means of commutation due many reasons. Further, I believe even in future the car will be the most preferred means of transportation from point to point.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 54, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'wheeler' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'wheelers'.
Suggestion: wheelers
...ssert that traveling by a personal four wheeler is the best while others say that cycle...
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Line 7, column 278, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...udes a cycle. The reason many choose it is because of the low cost of maintenance, no fuel...
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Line 7, column 634, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s where people find it hard to maintain a other modes of transport in those place...
^
Line 7, column 642, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'mode'?
Suggestion: mode
...people find it hard to maintain a other modes of transport in those places cycles are...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63580246914 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65478032201 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537037037037 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.213682 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.875 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167254149266 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592295244295 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767788556203 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11399333561 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719464364255 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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