Some people feel that boarding schools (where students or pupils live at school during the term) are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for many reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and conclude.
Boarding school is a school where children reside in the premises for the entire session. Some people feel that boarding schools are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for many reasons. This essay will discuss both sides in detail and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
To commence with, in boarding school, students do not have any distractions so that educational environment helps children to excel in their academics and to clarify their doubts at any time. Boarding school also prepares children for their adulthood by teaching many life lessons. Like, they become more responsible and lead a disciplined life. They become more independent as they have to do all their work and chores by themselves. For example, a study showed that, boarding school children are more resilient and can deal any adverse situation better. As a result, they become more responsible, punctual and also perform better in academics.
On the other hand, some people believe that children should not go to in boarding school, as they have bright chance to come across depression and homesickness. Children usually spend their childhood with their grandparents, parents and siblings. When children live in boarding school, they tend to get depressed because their family members are not around them to give affection, love and support. For instance, boarding school student become victims of bullying and even though some children commit suicide also. Therefore, children feel homesick most of the time and get depressed.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that at the beginning of boarding school children may face some issues, but when they accustomed to the environment and get their entire education from such schools, they emerge as knowledgeable individuals who can survive in any situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 510, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ven though some children commit suicide also. Therefore, children feel homesick most...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 289.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38062283737 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70978665042 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570934256055 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8013605285 50.4703680194 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.666666667 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388257131933 0.242375264174 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147071242362 0.0925447433944 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.165217385183 0.071462118173 231% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27523623518 0.151781067708 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.201139267733 0.0609392437508 330% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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