Man is a social animal, to survive in this society everyone has to have relationships. Friends bring energy in life, they refresh our soul. To have friends is one of the greatest blessing of God. I do not agree with this statement that it is important to keep old friends than to make new friends. Many people come in our life some stay and some leave. thinking of my friends since childhood I had many friends but till now not all are in contact. In every stage of life we meet different people and make them friends.
Friendship is built on the basis of nature and trust. With time human travels from one place to another. Everyone makes friends in family, neighborhood, colleges, schools, university, church etc. making friends while travelling helps us learn about their culture. With time when people get married friendship within family and relatives increases and new relationships are developed. After having kids parents make friends with families that are decent and can incorporate in their family with kids.
I still remember my old friends and after so many years I found those old friends on social media we talk but not much, now friendship is strengthened with those that are around me. To conclude, I think it is good to make new friends with time that are of your age and whom you can trust but at the same time it is also unfair to leave your old friends.
- TPO-03 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TPO-01 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.Use specific reaso 60
- TPO-03 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ncorporate in their family with kids. I still remember my old friends and afte...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, then, while, as to, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 1977.66487455 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 244.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65163934426 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4570586469 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573770491803 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 618.680645161 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2655628988 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6666666667 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2666666667 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53333333333 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268345566296 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870446748963 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113542195287 0.0737576698707 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179588930129 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397384714458 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 86.8835125448 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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