There have been many life changing advances in the last century. Which is the most important invention of the past 100 years the motor vehicles or antibiotics? Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
Many inventions have brought several advances in our lives in past 100 years and those are making our lives easy and protecting world’s population. Motor vehicle and antibiotics inventions in automobile industry and medical field are the most invention. I believe that the antibiotics invention in medical field is more important than any other invention. This essay will discuss both inventions in detail and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
To commence with, undoubtedly, technology helped the automobile industry to grow faster and bring many inventions to make our lives more convenient. The Car is one the best inventions in automobile industry because today, there are several cars are available and these are pocket friendly for human and help people to have some relieve in today’s hustle- bustle life. Some cars are environment friendly as well, thus help to reduce greenhouse gas emission and save the planet. For example, Japan is more concentrating on Electric cars and these cars helped Japan’s economic growth and environment programs. Therefore, these inventions help with the country’s economic and save the planet.
Furthermore, inventions of new antibiotics do wonders in medical fields. These antibiotics have reduced the risk of many deadly diseases and even eradicated some diseases completely. Now, many vaccines and antibiotics are preventing the diseases at first place. For instance, diseases such as smallpox and malaria, which are responsible for killing millions of people, have been virtually eliminated. Thus, these antibiotics saved millions of lives and will continue to be saved millions of lives.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that cars make our life easier and help in economic growth and antibiotic inventions are protecting the world’s population. In my opinion, antibiotics invention is by far the most important and significant discovery of the last century.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 279, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'antibiotics'' or 'antibiotic's'?
Suggestion: antibiotics'; antibiotic's
... the most invention. I believe that the antibiotics invention in medical field is more impo...
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Line 7, column 302, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nificant discovery of the last century.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 8.36945812808 227% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1207.87684729 138% => OK
No of words: 297.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62962962963 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01188943474 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525252525253 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 530.1 379.143842365 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5430441892 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213962962941 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769408249476 0.0925447433944 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530434196512 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143412488169 0.151781067708 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618302573372 0.0609392437508 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 53.1260098522 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 11.5310837438 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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