One of your friends recently had a birthday celebration, but you missed it and you forgot to tell your friend that you couldn’t attend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
– explain why you missed it
– explain why you didn’t tell your friend
– and say what you would like to do to show that you are sorry
Hi Joe,
I am so sorry that I didn’t make it to your birthday party. I feel terrible that I wasn’t there to sing Happy Birthday to you with the rest of the guys.
The reason why I missed it is because of my boss, who told my team to work overtime to finish our latest project. This meant that we had to work very late on the night of your birthday.
I would also like to apologize for not letting you know I had to work that night. It slipped my mind for a couple of reasons. The main one was that I was so busy and focused on meeting the deadline for the project. Also, I was so stressed out that I completely forgot to call you
I am really so sad that I missed the celebrations that I want to invite you to my house next weekend to have a mini birthday party. Mark will be visiting from Spain so there is another reason to come.
Please let me know if you can come, so I can plan a few surprises for you.
Best wishes,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 28, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...the guys. The reason why I missed it is because of my boss, who told my team to work ov...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, i feel, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 770.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.07407407407 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23128662786 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582010582011 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.317776398 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263258475811 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868526617779 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694066723114 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144696732667 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054618245653 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.03 8.71597938144 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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