Despite improvements in vehicle technology, there are still large numbers of road accidents. Explain some of the causes of these accidents, and suggest some measures that could be taken to address the problem.
During the last two-decades, the number of traffic accidents has been increasing although there are some new technologies and innovations related to car and road devices. There is no doubt that it absolutely causes some problems for both government and individuals, while it could be resolved by some solutions.
There are many contributors in this issue such as drunk driving, especially near the Christmas holidays that juveniles and young generation are consuming alcohol without consideration to its damaging consequences. Distraction, carelessness, and tiredness are usually some dangerous beh...
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Sentence: Admittedly, one of the most crucial aspects to resolve this problem is promote the public education by some active programmes like workshops and free booklets that have exactly positive effect in the society.
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Suggestion: Refer to is and promote
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