When you are assigned an important for work or school, you prefer to work on it right away so that you can work on it a little bit everyday, or wait until you have a good idea about the presentation.
Everybody may be assigned to make a presentation in front of their schoolmates or coworkers, some people incline to prepare for the presentation when they receive the assignment because they could complete only a small portion of the presentation everyday and they do not need to worry about the deadline. Other individuals are willing to start their works until they get a fascinating idea. From my perspective, I would like to prepare the presentation as long as I know it and I think this could lead to good effects.
First, presentation is not an easy work so we may have some emergences during...
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