Dear Sir,
I am writing to draw your attention to some of the problems we are experiencing with your mass transit
in Rosemount Avenue. Prior to this time, we have been enyoying the best mass trasnport service from your
organization not until recently we started noticing late arrival and reduced number of buses plying the area. These problems are greatly affecting on the general populace of this area.
Let me explain the problems in details. Majority of the inhabitant of the Rosemount are working class people living there with their families. For a very long time, we have been having two buses that do transit people and the school pupils fifty minutes before the official resumption time to the city center. However, this has changed of recent, we only have one bus plying the area now which is not sufficient. Moreso, the bus do arrive very late making it difficult for the workers and the students to resume late everyday.
In order not to lose people's confidence in your company, I think you need to improve the service by restoring the number of buses commuting the route, or better still, increase the number of buses to the area. The population has grown significantly and you can confirm this by visiting the community. In addition, please ensure that buses are arriving on time.
I lookf forward to your cooperation in this matter.
Yours faithfully,
James John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: some
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...he best mass trasnport service from your organization not until recently we start...
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Suggestion: every day
...workers and the students to resume late everyday. In order not to lose peoples confid...
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...lose peoples confidence in your company, I think you need to improve the service ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, still, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95744680851 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49241856321 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5151240121 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6153846154 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0769230769 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179382399159 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695331760614 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628603441018 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100841583812 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534659164117 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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