Some people think that happiness is related to economic success. others think that money has no role in happiness. Discuss both views and give your opinion with the help of your example.
Need of happiness is undeniable for an individual's life. Melancholy takes toll on one's mind. Some believe that prosperity is connected to monetary victory whereas the rest argue that money have no part to take in happiness. The following paragraphs intend to explore both the viewpoints. However, I agree with the latter view point.
At the outset, monetary value holds great importance to human's life in many ways, for instance, provides everyday needs, health expenses, education, a nest and what not. Elaborating further it meets expenses such as emergency health care, however, a person with enough money can only afford surgeries from reputed doctors. Many a disease such as leukemia has exorbitantly expensive treatment near about $5,00,000. People who can manage to buy this treatment are only the affluents. A survey shows that approximately only 10% of affected people are benefited by this treatment, as they are the only who can afford.
Furthermore, commercial boom provides better education and high living standard. Education expenses have skyrocketed since last decades, therefore one needs to earn more to secure their children's future. Moreover, everyday needs are also accomplished by money, for instance, destitute cannot get filtered water, no inverter, no AC and many more. Poverty line as defined world bank in 2015 is income of $1.90 per day and how can he have a good living.
On contrary, money cannot buy a cheerful and satisfied life, other factors that play a key role in providing a rejoice are relationships and interests. If a person is centered mainly towards materialism and hankers after more and more money. Calmness and wellbeing will diminish from his life. To exemplify, there are many saints and artists like poets who are just interested in their work, even small every day earning satisfies them.
To conclude, although money cannot buy us all the happiness, but better-facilitated life aims to fulfil our dreams and vanishes the depression.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26729559748 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80883805505 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672955974843 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.272488204 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1578947368 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7368421053 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15789473684 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112654458096 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0321791083028 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341183957165 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0631037858199 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383315503374 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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