Transportation system plays and important role in individuals life. Some people claim that commuting through public mode of transport is superior over commuting done via personal cars. However, there are both merits and demerits for public and personal transport. In this essay , I will discuss some of the reasons why public mode of transport is preferred over personal vehicle.
To begin with, Using personal cars for traversing on daily basis contributes towards increasing the pollution level . Emission of gases from the vehicles impacts air quality. Secondly ,traffic jams are caused due to increasing number of vehicles on the road.In order to curb with the the situation , people should follow practice of car pool. Thirdly , self driven cars also leads to depletion of wastage of natural resources.
Turning to the other side of the argument ,personal cars acts as a time saving technique. People can cover distance at their own ease unlike waiting for buses in the case of public mode. Travelling in personal cars is much comfortable. Personal cars also offer luxuries like comfortable seats , air conditioning. Moreover , with the help of self driven cars reaching to remote destination is easy. For instance , there are many areas where bus routes are not available or have operational timings. Personal cars are like boom in such conditions.
To sum up, public mode of transport are environment friendly and cost effective. on other hand personal cars are much comfortable , time saving. I believe that the benefits in terms of commuting through public transport outweighs personal cars.
- Many people prefer to use public transportation while others say that personal cars are the best mode of transportation. In your opinion what are the pros and cons of using public transport. 22
- Many people prefer to use public transportation while others say that personal cars are the best mode of transportation In your opinion what are the pros and cons of using public transport 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33201581028 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73761693244 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620553359684 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5005956186 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.9444444444 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0555555556 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355126844012 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105196573542 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658568045136 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212431586386 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0825825823174 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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