The diagrams show the stages and equipment used in the process of cement making and how cement is is used to produce the concrete for building purposes.
The given flow charts reveal the information about the processes of cement and concrete manufacturing by some neccesary equipment and materials.
It can be seen that the cement is made using four stages:crusher,mixer, and rotating heater, grinder,and in concrete production have one stage is concrete mixer.
At the first stage in the production of the cement: limestone ,and clay are mixed together pass out the crusher, and to produce powder. Next,the powder pass through mixer. Then , the mixer is also pass through the rotating heater. As it is in the rotating heater tube is introduced from the end of tube before the blend is actually drop in the grinder . Then,finally to create the cement, and this cement pack into the bags.
Cement concrete production begins with collection of large materials: cement,water, and sand, gravel. Firstly,take the material of cement, water, and sand,gravel put into the container of clockwise direction . Then , to produce the concrete mixture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , mixer
...cement is made using four stages:crusher,mixer, and rotating heater, grinder,and in co...
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Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...sher,mixer, and rotating heater, grinder,and in concrete production have one stage i...
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Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... the production of the cement: limestone ,and clay are mixed together pass out the...
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Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...the crusher, and to produce powder. Next,the powder pass through mixer. Then , the m...
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Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...Next,the powder pass through mixer. Then , the mixer is also pass through the rota...
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Line 5, column 232, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... also pass through the rotating heater. As it is in the rotating heater tube is in...
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Line 5, column 333, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'dropped'.
Suggestion: dropped
...nd of tube before the blend is actually drop in the grinder . Then,finally to create...
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Line 5, column 352, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...he blend is actually drop in the grinder . Then,finally to create the cement, and ...
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Line 5, column 359, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , finally
...d is actually drop in the grinder . Then,finally to create the cement, and this cement p...
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Line 7, column 27, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the bags. Cement concrete production begins with collection of large material...
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Line 7, column 78, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , water
...th collection of large materials: cement,water, and sand, gravel. Firstly,take the mat...
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Line 7, column 111, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , take
... cement,water, and sand, gravel. Firstly,take the material of cement, water, and sand...
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Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , gravel
... the material of cement, water, and sand,gravel put into the container of clockwise di...
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Line 7, column 176, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ent, water, and sand,gravel put into the container of clockwise direction . Then...
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Line 7, column 210, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to the container of clockwise direction . Then , to produce the concrete mixture...
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Line 7, column 211, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...o the container of clockwise direction . Then , to produce the concrete mixture....
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Line 7, column 218, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...container of clockwise direction . Then , to produce the concrete mixture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, finally, first, firstly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 837.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07257004504 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61935483871 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.482926829268 1449% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4246390674 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277139508963 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105049480421 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762210740304 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170041508839 0.15604864568 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308736931308 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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