Not only education but quality education is what every student deserves. In order to give the students quality education and help them shape their future, an appropriate curriculum is required. A curriculum requires that it should not be rigid. It should be flexible and cater to the interests of a student. The given recommendation seems a bit parochial and doesn't seem promising in giving quality education to the students.
When a student is about to apply for a college, he or she is expected to already know what specialization or which field he or she would be opting. For the students to know what they should be opting, they should already be interested in that particular field. This requires a flexible curriculum. For example, if a student is going to study Humanities in the college, the student should already have some prior knowledge and exposure to that field or subject. The level of the knowledge doesn't need to be high. But if the national curriculum didacts the students to do specific prescribed courses in the secondary or high school which do not give the required exposure to the student interested in Humanities, then the student might never know about his interest in Humanities. Also, the student may find it stressful to endure the subjects of that curriculum.
The idea of having a single national curriculum may prove to be challenging for the teachers as well. Every teacher has his or her own way of teaching the students. Flexibility to have a teaching style and independence to choose some chapters or topics must be given to the teachers. If a teacher is enjoined to teach in a specific manner, he or she may find it difficult to adjust and therefore, may not be able to devote their full attention to students.
In case of countries like India, where there are multiple recognized languages and almost half of the states speak non-Hindi languages, enforcing a same national curriculum including only Hindi as a mandatory language subject after English does not at all seem to be a pragmatic idea. People of these non-Hindi states take pride in their native languages and would want their children to learn their respective regional language or mother tongue until college.
For the reasons described above, the government of a country must analyze and carefully design a curriculum which allows for flexibilities to some extent. A curriculum must ensure all-round development of a student and must be able to adapt to the interests of a student.
- Educators should teach facts only after their students have studied the ideas, trends, and concepts that help explain those facts.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendati 66
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasonin 50
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ecommendation seems a bit parochial and doesnt seem promising in giving quality educat...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ving quality education to the students. When a student is about to apply for a c...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... or subject. The level of the knowledge doesnt need to be high. But if the national cu...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a specific manner" with adverb for "specific"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...hers. If a teacher is enjoined to teach in a specific manner, he or she may find it difficult to adj...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, so, then, therefore, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2012.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 406.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95566502463 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82892898207 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480295566502 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0382904807 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.6 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184385948022 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617938236896 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496303887699 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972493559452 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510374245189 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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