The table below show information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Percentage of national consumer expenditure by category 2002.

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The table below show information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Percentage of national consumer expenditure by category 2002.

The given tabular representation depicts the proportion of national consumer expenditure on different goods in five different countries in 2002.

At a first glance, it can be seen that the highest amount of money spent by Turkey on food, drink and tobacco that was 32.14%. However Ireland was noticed at second position which spent 28.91% money whereas Swedish people spent lowest money on food ,drink and tobacco (15.77%) . furthermore these items got 16.36% share from Italy and 18.80% from Spain.

Asserting further ,it can be said that ,clothing and footwear had highest share from Italy. Interestingly the other four countries remained between 5% and 6% respectively. Apparently in the case of leisure and education all countries Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey spent almost same amount of money ( 2.21%, 3.20%, 1.98%, 3.22%, 4.35% respectively ).

Overall, it is evident that, all countries spent maximum money on food, drink and tobacco rather then other goods.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ood, drink and tobacco that was 32.14%. However Ireland was noticed at second position ...
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Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'spent the lowest'.
Suggestion: spent the lowest
...ent 28.91% money whereas Swedish people spent lowest money on food ,drink and tobacco 15.77%...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...wedish people spent lowest money on food ,drink and tobacco 15.77% . furthermore t...
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Suggestion: .
... money on food ,drink and tobacco 15.77% . furthermore these items got 16.36% shar...
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Suggestion: Furthermore
...ney on food ,drink and tobacco 15.77% . furthermore these items got 16.36% share from Italy...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: furthermore,
...ney on food ,drink and tobacco 15.77% . furthermore these items got 16.36% share from Italy...
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...18.80% from Spain. Asserting further ,it can be said that ,clothing and footwe...
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... Asserting further ,it can be said that ,clothing and footwear had highest share ...
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Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the highest'.
Suggestion: had the highest
...can be said that ,clothing and footwear had highest share from Italy. Interestingly the oth...
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Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...our countries remained between 5% and 6% respectively. Apparently in the case of ...
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Line 5, column 310, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Turkey spent almost same amount of money 2.21%, 3.20%, 1.98%, 3.22%, 4.35% respec...
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Suggestion: .
... 3.20%, 1.98%, 3.22%, 4.35% respectively . Overall, it is evident that, all cou...
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Line 7, column 98, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...money on food, drink and tobacco rather then other goods.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, furthermore, however, if, second, then, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40522875817 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55983545257 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679738562092 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0555127546 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.375 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 5.23603664747 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139781230671 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071685458547 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145681226683 0.0843802449381 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131507110931 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.187027361824 0.0819641961636 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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