A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
I disagree with the idea that nations should have it's students follow the same curriculum regardless of region. While on the surface this may seem like a great solution to the educational inequality that many regions of countries have with one another, this should not be the solution to that problem. I think that a national curriculum will ultimately lead to more issues than it may solve.
First, is the question of how a national curriculum would effect the teachers. Someone that shares their knowledge and enthusiasm for subjects is a priceless societal commodity. Teachers can frequen...
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Sentence: Also, these same schools may want to study temperate forests over tropical ones since all they would need to do is take a walk in a state park for field work.
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Suggestion: Refer to is and take
Sentence: Finally, a nation that has adults that have all been taught the same curriculum may be dangerously homogenous in ideas.
Error: homogenous Suggestion: homogeneous
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