These days, it is easy to prepare food, and people prefer easy ways to cook because they do not have enough time for cooking. However, that causes major problems to human health.
Firstly, this change has improved human life. people needed to find new ways to keep the foods fresh. Also, they want to find some ways to cut vegetables, meat, and chicken easily so that they need to buy the new technology. Food processors, meat cutters, and refrigerators play important role in human life. For example, I have purchaised complete appliance for my home to increase the rate of cooking.
Secondly, people buy frozen and pre-cooked food from supermarkets, and maintain those in their refrigerator. When they are hungry, they put those in microwave for cooking. For instance, I usually buy lots of frozen meat, chicken, and vegetables every month, and keep those in my refrigerator. At nights, when I arrive home, I put those foods in my microwave device, and I prepare a delicious food for dinner.
In spite of the fact that everyone wants to find easy way for cooking, fastfoods and restaurants are prefered. People tend to buy cheap foods from fastfoods. They usually prefer delicious modern foods to traditional foods; however, this has many disadvantages to human health. For example, In past, I usually bought food from fastfoods because I was very busy. I had catch a cold easily and got sick rapidly. After searching why I got sick easily, I find that I must prevent buying foods from fastfoods. These days, I rarely feel bad, and I believe that I am a strong boy.
All in all, on the one hand, preparing food easily has advanced the way people live. On the other hand, this endangers human healty. Consequently, as far as health is concerned, I believe that not only do everyone find quick way to produce foods, but he or she must also find the right way for producing food.
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Sentence: For example, I have purchaised complete appliance for my home to increase the rate of cooking.
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Sentence: In spite of the fact that everyone wants to find easy way for cooking, fastfoods and restaurants are prefered.
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Sentence: On the other hand, this endangers human healty.
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