It is believed by some that popular sporting events such as football world cup and other international sporting event contribute in mitigating international tensions and cater to patriotic emotions in much effective way. In my opinion, international sporting events does help in building cross-country relationships and also more and more people tend to associate their happiness with their respective teams performance in the event.
Firstly, International sporting events acts as a crowd-puller and citizens of various countries visit the host country which is organizing the event to cheer for their teams with flags, tattoos and hoardings. This encourages the team players performing in the event as well as supporters tend to form groups within the stadium with similar jerseys which also serves a source of entertainment for people watching competition. Teams do struggle with each other to fight for the top spot and gaining superiority over other countries to prove themselves in the event.
To conclude, it is best to compete in sports and associate emotions with it rather than waging war between countries to establish command over other nations. This way people can relate to it as well as there are no drawbacks with people competing to get a trophy in an event.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, so, well, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28431372549 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95368256193 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.4389220368 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.0 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1428571429 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285887756456 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14532172139 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16427679886 0.0667982634062 246% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205468091873 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143445524797 0.056905535591 252% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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