The given line chart illustrate information about the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. It is clear and coherent representation.The data is celebrated in percentum.
It can be seen that,the winter season is increase the data is 38000 near by 40000. It's data is decrese on 32000 and data is expand that on 40000.A pare from all this Is expand the 40000 higher data further show that the data decline is 32000 in England.
As for as trend is concerned that, The electricity is very high percentum of Heating rooms, heating water in52.5%in England. In 17.5% ovens,kettles,washing machine normal electricity use for England.In addition to this lighting,tv,radio is 15% electricity use of this country and In vacum cleaner,food mixer and electric tools is 15% use of electricity.
Overall,it is Crystal clear that the heating rooms, heating water is many higher percentum of electricity and very lowest use of lightning,tv,radio and electric tools.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
It can be seen that,the winter season is increase the data is 3...
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Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'winter'.
Suggestion: winter
It can be seen that,the winter season is increase the data is 38000 near by 4...
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Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...er season is increase the data is 38000 near by 40000. Its data is decrese on 32000 and...
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Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'expanded'.
Suggestion: expanded
...ts data is decrese on 32000 and data is expand that on 40000.A pare from all this Is e...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
... 32000 and data is expand that on 40000.A pare from all this Is expand the 40000 ...
^
Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... 32000 and data is expand that on 40000.A pare from all this Is expand the 40000 highe...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 139, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , kettles
... water in52.5%in England. In 17.5% ovens,kettles,washing machine normal electricity use ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 199, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...hine normal electricity use for England.In addition to this lighting,tv,radio is 1...
^^
Line 2, column 227, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , tv
...for England.In addition to this lighting,tv,radio is 15% electricity use of this co...
^^^
Line 2, column 296, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , food
...use of this country and In vacum cleaner,food mixer and electric tools is 15% use of ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...ols is 15% use of electricity. Overall,it is Crystal clear that the heating rooms...
^^^
Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , tv
...tricity and very lowest use of lightning,tv,radio and electric tools.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, as for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 653.0 965.302439024 68% => OK
No of words: 127.0 196.424390244 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14173228346 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35699682299 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31835351085 2.65546596893 125% => OK
Unique words: 72.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566929133858 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 191.7 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9587581542 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.6 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189153752692 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101843853366 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0108198682658 0.0843802449381 13% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119449121933 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0155860898246 0.0819641961636 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.