Nowadays, the importance of people spending too much time on work rather than their personal life was always a debatable topic. Many people state that spending too much time in office is creating problems in their personal life. I completely agree with this statement. This essay will further elaborate on the reasons for this problem and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are innumerable reasons why spending more time in office is creating issues in personal life. First of all, companies put a lot of pressure on their employees to complete their work within the deadline. Because of that work pressure, people always feel stressed and tired. For example, sometimes employees should have to work on weekends as well because of a heavy workload than they cannot spend time with their family so, it is creating a huge gap from their family. Thus, it is clear that this problem is creating a lot of problem in people life.
Moreover, people can cause many health problems when they do long hours shifts and be sitting in the same place. people can be face health issues like obesity, back problem, stress and many more. In some cases. when people cannot be a balance between personal and professional life than it cause of divorce as well. For instance, according to Time magazine, it is cleared that according to one survey, highest reasons for divorce rate is when people giving not enough time for their family. Thereby, unbalance time, management between personal and professional life will create a lot of issue in their life.
In the view of arguments outlined above, one can be concluded that for a healthy lifestyle and family bonding people have to divide their time between professional and personal life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1207.87684729 134% => OK
No of words: 328.0 242.827586207 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93292682927 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40178894263 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469512195122 0.580463131201 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 502.2 379.143842365 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1073111675 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8888888889 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72222222222 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.553984452504 0.242375264174 229% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193650866107 0.0925447433944 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.200063275076 0.071462118173 280% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.394801238896 0.151781067708 260% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.277804770623 0.0609392437508 456% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.32886699507 88% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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